Today's challenge was to rewrite our store announcements. I wanted to shorten mine up so you could see my featured items right away. I'm not really sure its my final choice but here is the before and after.
Before:
Welcome, Thanks for stopping by my shop. Have a look around I'm sure you'll find something you'll love or the perfect gift for someone else. Remember to check back often.
**SHIPPING** If I charge you over a dollar extra for shipping I will refund your money back to you. Shipping cost includes the actual cost of shipping and the packaging.**
***My profile contains all of our store policies***
Proud member of Wisconsin street team(WIST,) Ecoetsy, and EtsyU.
Read my blog at
http://www.glitterstardesigns.blogspot.com/
After:
Welcome to my shop. I’m sure you’ll find something you’ll love or the perfect gift. I am always adding something new so check back often. I am convo friendly. Contact me whenever you want for whatever reason.
***My profile contains all of my store policies***
Proud member of Wisconsin street team(WIST,) Ecoetsy, EtsyU, and DSM.
Blog- http://www.glitterstardesigns.blogspot.com
